Tag: Writing

Why does  Maungarei sleeps?

Why did Maungarei got woken up from her sleep.  

 Many, many years ago, Maungarei got upset because she woke up from her   nap. So she finally laid down when she got so upset that she was about to explode.

  When she woke up from her sleep she got really angry and frustrated about how she got woken up from the nap that she had.

And somewhere that she got really mad she started that she was about to explode, she started to grumble once when grumble and it started to get even louder and louder and it got even louder that I can’t even believe that it got that there was some smock that she was even about to explode and before it was about to explode it was exploded and then there was a big bomb and she wake up the other sleepers. 

After that the sleepers woke up and they all started to shake really hard and everyone started to scream and they were all scared at the same time. 

She was really lonely because she was an only child there.

And then she heard something and it was her brother and she 

said to him what are you doing here and then he started to explain that he was the only child who was all alone.

And she was so upset that everyone was mad at her and started to get angry,sad. 

She also started to get amoshall too. 

All of the volcanoes woke up and they all started to get really angry at her.  

Like so angry that they can explode and if she explodes when all of the volcanoes are going to explode too. 

So the her parents got angry at her because she did something bad to someone and then her Mum said that her sister is her favorite child and when she said that Maungarei got really mad at her mom because she thinks that she is not good earth for her family.and that’s how she got really made at her Mom and Dad And her family too. 

Maungarei needs to take a big breath and count to 5 Her mum needs to change that to her favorite child to that she loves all of her family so much that she can have fun with her family and friends too. 

And I just hope that she will love her family too. I  love  Maungarei.

LI: To use our smart searching skills.

For this activty reached about kokako bird and write some facts about it.

Embed your DLO on your blog.Our Year 7/8 camp was at Kokako Lodge in Hunua.

Our challenge today was to use our smart searching skills to find out about the kokako bird and create an infographic to share the facts we researched in our own words.Something I found interesting about the kokako bird was they can Run on their long legs over the tree branches.

LI: To write a poem that describes a moment in time

For this Activty I did Hi Bream and it was very scary at first be I got up there anyway it was fun up there and scary too.

Embed your DLO on your blog.

At camp we had lots of challenge activities to try. Our challenge in with our poem was to chose our words carefully so that we painted a clear picture of what we were describing in the mind of our readers. and I have described what it was like to…. We chose this challenge because we can tell the word how we felt facing our fears and the activtes.

Today we used the ‘2 words 2 minute’ challenge to write a description about the ancient olympics. After talking in pairs about the things we knew about the ancient  olympics we created a list of words (vocabulary) that would help us write our description. We chose the words ‘Greece’ and ‘athletes’ to help us think about what we were going to write.

We talked about ideas with a partner, then we had 2 minutes to put those ideas into sentences. After the time was up we had 2 minutes to reread what we had written and make changes if anything didn’t make sense or if we had words and punctuation in the wrong place. When we finished checking we had 2 more minutes to carry on writing our descriptions.

This activity was really fun because we had a challenge for ourselves.

This week i learned about how to do some Emotive language.

First Miss White shoed as inscruction how to do some Emotive language. Emotive language means a word that makes you feel a certain way.

I did well at doing my blog post.

I need to improve my spelling.

I enjoyed maying the DLO .

This week we needed to write Informal letter. 

First we need to write about the Informal letter to Family and friends.

I wrote my letters to my mum and my brother.

I enjoyed writing these letters to my family. I did well at writing my message. I need to improve on my spelling.

First Mr Wong got me  some paper to write about  kitttens.

This is a perfect rhyme  poem I am learning.

First I got words that rhyme sounds like sat, cat, mat, rat and bat.

Then I started to think about cats and kittens.

here is my  Poem

Cats are funny

cats are hungry,

cats are angry

and hairy and crazy.

I Love cats and kittens too.